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19 Nov 2006 01:01 am

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ghost reader (Guest), 19 Nov 2006 03:00 am

attack Attack of the Red String posts. >_<
Great art work though

Erythrocyte, 19 Nov 2006 08:08 pm

I love the artwork. I plan on following the story. You make really good hands - Just something I noticed.

quotemaster, 06 Dec 2006 06:25 pm

Re: comments Thank you so much for you comments.

Hehe, I know, just one page per post. I am slow :(.

I have a lot of trouble with hands, so I am really happy that you like them.

Gibson Twist, 06 Jan 2007 02:21 am

Hi, I'm responding to your request for a critique in the forums. I hope it's useful.

The shape of the hands is really good, but they are a bit small. I find the best way to keep the proportions in mind while I'm drawing is that they are roughly the same size as your face. Otherwise, it's a good first page, very cinematic. And those are GREAT bubles.

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